Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Paragraphing

Please read these links.

Paragraphs and Topic Sentences.

Paragraph and Sentence Structure.

Developing Coherent Paragraphs.

Write a one paragraph response in the comments that explains how this information will be used to revise your paragraphs for Tuesday's Writing Workshop.

18 comments:

jozzy gurl said...

I think that the list of things to do revise a paragraph or to write a paper are good and very descriptive for me to learn and write better, as far as a paper being writen. it can help me understand the key steps to go through to accomplish a good essay.

Anonymous said...

I think all of this has really helped me with my writing overall. I can really use the tips that i have leanred when writing an essay

DAllen said...

This has help me out a lot on my writing.I will be able to use these tips I learned for the rest of my life in writing.

Steph Ruzzin said...

I think these articles are extremely helpful. While writing I can refer back to the information for structure and guidance. If I can apply all these concepts I know I can become a successful writer.

Ryan E said...

In the articles the main idea stressed using coherent paragraphs and also have ideas to support your claims. I also found out how to have better coherency when writing and transitions from sentence to sentence. In the last article I realized how to help support your topic sentence and expand on my main ideas. It also showed me some good example of how to show connections.

Angie said...

The paragraphing information is going to be very beneficial to helping our revisions. All of the information that was listed can be brought to reality and help not only me, but others in my class. We now all know the same material, so we are able to help if any of your classmates have questions.

Stephanie said...

I think that this information will help by making sure all the sentences have the subject and verb and details to get you point and ideas across. The develpopement of the paragraphs will be more detailed.

Angela Shamus said...

All of this information will deffinitly help me in the writing work shop on Tuesday. These articles have gave me many good tips to use when writing a essay. Gave me good ideas how to revise my paragrahs, to use coherent paragraphs and also to have ideas to support your claim. These articles will deffinitly help me on Tuesday.

Reggie P said...

These sites will help me maintain structure in the paragraph and not get off topic. The tips on topic sentences will help me out. It gives examples of different types of transitions. It shows things that you should not do when you're writing your paper.

Charlene said...

I think all three articles are helpful in different ways. When I write any of my papers for any of my classes I can go back and look it over if needed. Since Im not a good writer and plan to improve these tips will always help me in the futer.

Tiff said...

I feel that all of this stuff is helping me to become a better writer. I learn most of the stuff in high school, but I really nevered paid attention. Now the second time around I am start to understand and see how to write correctly.

Rob Hutchinson said...

Each of these links stress the fact of using supporting detail in all of your paragraphs. All of these details should be related to the thesis or topic sentence. It helped me to understand that the structure must be accurate for the paper to be a perfect essay.

Nicole's Blog said...

All the information will hopfully help me in the writing work shop on tuesday. It will make me a better writer and I will be able to look over my paper better and see if I made any mistakes.

Robbie V said...

All of the items that I looked at make your paragraphs flow better. It makes you sentences should better and make you seem like you know what you are talking about. These are good tools for writing.

Ryan Byrnes said...

I fell that all of the articles are helpful and different in some ways. When I write my papers for my classes I can go back and look it over when I need to. I will try and use the steps Wright a good paper

Abby B. said...

The information will help us in many ways such as developing good topic sentences and helping set a specific topic for our paragraphs. Also, these sites will help us know how to word our topic sentence and where to put them in our paragraphs. Once we have our topic sentence that summarizes our paragraphs these sites will help us make our sentences in our paragraphs flow correctly. Also, these sites will help us with the body of our paragraphs. We will then be able to organize our paragraphs to what we actually wanted to talk about. Also, we learned correct grammar, how to organize, and what to write at the very ending to summarize it again.

Jaime said...

These links was very usual to me. I will use the information given to enhance not only my seven paragraphs but all of my writings. I will create parallel structured sentences as well as supporting details. I will also include transition words.

jasmine said...

I think that these links were very helpful and organized. These links helped me understand the types of structure a paper should have.